Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-pdif-lo-profile-13.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com> 
Review Date: 2008-11-24 
IETF LC End Date: 2008-11-30

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.

Comments:
- I have taken the effort of validating all the XML examples included in the draft. I used the Xerces validator available at http://validate.openlaboratory.net/. I find awkward to include 39 XML Schema files (thanks to the OpenGML explosion of schema files), but that doesn't seem to be a problem (other than for humans). Other than that, the examples all validate.

- The short name of the draft (which is printed as a heading in every
page) is set to "GEOPRIV PIDF-LO Profile". I think it should be set to "GEOPRIV PIDF-LO Usage", since neither the title nor the text refer to the document as a profile.

- Section 1, first paragraph, add an informative reference to GMLv3 when it is mentioned in the text.

- Section 2, 5th paragraph, expand "LIS" and "LCP".

- Section 5, the first paragraph on page 15. What is a "WGS84 CRS"? Is this something where an informative reference could be added?