Document: draft-ietf-radext-design-05.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 20-November-2008 IETF LC End Date: 11-November-2008 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is well written, easy to understand and ready for publication as BCP, but I have a few comments of an editorial nature. Section 2.1.2 Paragraph 3 ========================== * s/mechaism /mechanism/ Section 2.1.3 ============= * s/interoperatibility/interoperability/ Section B.6 =========== * Replace non existent reference [8] with a reference to RFC3629 (At least I think that was what the authors intended)