Document: draft-ietf-roll-home-routing-reqs-06.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 22 December 2008
IETF LC End Date: 25 December 2008
IESG Telechat date: (if known) -

Summary: Almost ready for informational status.  I think a discussion of reliability may be needed, and there are a couple of nits.

Comments:
Abstract/s1:  One could quibble with the assertion that current modern
homes contain high numbers of wireless devices.   It is certainly
expected that in the near future homes will contain many more wireless devices.

s2.1: Probably need to define 'subnet groupcast' especially as you are not discussing it further.

s2.6/2.7:  It strikes me that some greater discussion of reliability is needed in these sections.  Both healthcare and domestic alarm systems will cause (legal) problems for their manufacturers and/or suppliers if reliability is inadequate, or there are excessive false positives

Editorial:
Terminology: Definition of Sensor:  s/data/physical quantity/ Last sentence of s1 and s9:  The document claims that the other ROLL requirements documents are referenced, but in fact they are not.