Draft:  draft-ietf-gruu-reg-event-03
Reviewer: Brian Stucker, Mary Barnes
Review Date: 7 April 2006
Review Deadline: 7 April 2006
Status: post WGLC (pre-IESG)

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, there is one
question for clarification and there are nits that should be fixed
before publication.

Question:
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- A question on the XML example from section 7:

The "allOneLine" tags for the sip.instance parameter only enclose the
CDATA of the "unknown-param" tag, but enclose the "gruu" tag and it's
CDATA on the next few lines down. I don't think it matters, but since
both was are shown, there's the possibility that one of them is wrong.
More importantly, the "allOneLine" tags are also introduced before
they're explained by the reference to [8] in section 8.

Nits:
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- The document was successfully run through idnits.
- SIP should likely appear somewhere in the title and I think the
convention is to include it all expanded.  Also, I think they'll want
GRUU expanded.  And, I think perhaps Reg should be expanded to
registration (but I'll leave that one up to you). So, I think you now
have a very long title: 
"Registration Event Package Extension for Session Initiation Protocol
(SIP) Globablly Routeable User Agent URIs (GRUUs)"   
[I'm also hoping they're not going to want to expand URIs, but I can see
that was done for the URI services draft]. 
- Really minor nit (that you could leave for RFC editor) - you sometimes
use "GRUU" and sometimes use "gruu"
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