Draft: draft-ietf-sipping-media-policy-dataset-04 Reviewer: Mary Barnes Review Date: 8 June 2007 Review Deadline: 11 June 2007 Status: WGLC Summary: This draft is on the right track for publication and has nits that need to be fixed before publication. Comments: --------- I had previously reviewed the -01 version and there's been too many changes for the rfcdiff to be useful or for my previous comments to apply. - The big comment is that section 8 needs to be reviewed by a Relax NG Expert per the Note (and the note removed once that has been done). Do we have someone in the SIPPING WG that can review that section? - [revised note]: reference [11]- draft-petrie-sipping-profile-dataset - needs to be progressed in order for this document to be published. At a minimum, that document needs updating to reflect the current configuration framework and should be agreed as a SIPPING WG item before this document can be progressed. Nits: ------ - Header: Need to add "Intended Status:" (i.e., category="std" in the field) - General: "media types" vs "media-types" (use one or the other consistently - i.e., the former is used in the Abstract, the latter in the 1st paragraph - I'm not sure where else) - Section 6.1, 3rd paragraph: "attribute" -> "attributes" - Section 8.10.1: 2nd paragraph: should read the " element is only defined inside a element" ( rather than ) - References: - [2] 3555 has been replaced by 4855 and 4856. - [5] has been published as RFC 3688.