Draft:  draft-ietf-sipping-pending-additions-00
Reviewer: Ben Campbell [ben@estacado.net]
Review Date: Monday 10/16/2006 11:12 PM CST
Review Deadline: 17 October 2006
Status: WGLC 

Summary: 
This draft looks mostly done to me--my comments are pretty trivial.  
(Or maybe I am just too tired to be picky right now :-) )

Section 2:

> Any SIP server, be it a proxy, B2BUA (Back-to-Back User Agent), or
>    some hybrid, that receives a request, translates its Request-URI  
> into
>    one or more next-hop URIs (i.e., recipient URIs), and delivers the
>    request to those URIs.

(editorial) Partial paragraph? I think this is the definition of a  
"relay", but the term never appears.


5.1

> The name of this event package is "pending-additions".

Since the use of this package is scoped to the consent-framework,  
could we have less generic package name? Maybe "pending-consent" or  
"consent-pending-additions"?