Draft:  draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani [vkg@lucent.com]
Review Date: Monday 6/19/2006 11:27 AM CST
Review Deadline: 7/01/2006
Status: WGLC 
Section: Section 2.1 and 2.2

Summary: 

Section 2.1:
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In F1, F2, F3, F4 and F5, there is an extra line between the
first Via header and the indented "branch" parameter, which
starts on a new line.  This line should be taken out.

Section 2.2:
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In F6, there is a spurious new line between the "c=" and
"t=" lines of the SDP body.

As a nice to have feature, it would be good to have the
IP addresses and host names of the participating actors listed
in the figures; something like:

          Proxy
      ss1.example.com
        192.0.2.54

But this will mean retro-fitting all the figures, and may not be
worth the pain.  I'll leave it to you to make that decision.