Draft:  draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-12.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani [vkg@lucent.com]
Review Date: 9 March 2007
Review Deadline:
Status: Post-WGLC 
Section: Section 2.1 and 2.2

Summary: 

In -12 I looked at sections 2.1 and 2.2 assigned to me.  They
are fine.

However, I did notice one thing - in many of the SIP signaling
messages, the Via field is displayed as:

      Via: SIP/2.0/TLS ss1.example.com:5061
        ;branch=z9hG4bK83749.1
        ;received=192.0.2.54

Syntactically, this is perfect; no problem.  However, I will
leave it to the editor to decide whether he should move the
"received" parameter one line up, and whether, for the sake of
orthogonality with other SIP*-documents, he should use the <allOneLine>
directive established by RjS.

Besides this minor feedback, which can the editor can choose to
ignore in the interest of getting the draft out expeditiously,
I am fine with my sections of the draft as they appear in -12.