Document: draft-cam-winget-eap-fast-provisioning-08.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 1 Jul 2008
IESG Telechat date: 3 Jul 2008

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Two comments and 3 nits below.

Comments:

1/ In S4.1.{2,3}, there is a term "PAC opaque".  I think you
    mean "PAC-Opaque", the opaque data that was defined in S4.1.1.
2/ In S6.3, first paragraph: should the "should" on line 3 be
    normative?  More so especially since the "MAY" seven lines
    down is normative.

Nits (on the chance that RFC Editor misses them):

1/ S3.2.3, third bullet item: missing the ending period.
2/ S4.1.2, last sentence of first paragraph:
    s/persisted/persistent
    OR
    s/persisted/persists
3/ S6.2, second paragraph, 10th line: s/and ,/and,