Document: draft-herzog-setkey-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20110203 IETF LC End Date: 20110222 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: I have an ASN.1 question related to implicit tagging: this can lead to encoding ambiguity with nested CHOICEs for instance, it is something which could be addressed in specs, is the extension mechanism an issue (i.e., the spec can be correct now but become incorrect whene extended) and BTW is there a known tool to check the syntax against this particular issue? Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 5 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1.1 page 3 and 2 page 8: Becuase/becuase -> Because/because - 1.1 page 3: partipants -> participants - 1.2 page 5: futher -> further - 1.3 page 5: Heirarchy -> Hierarchy - 2 page 6 and A page 11 (twice): XX -> TBD? or TBD1/TBD2? (note this will be solved anyway by the assignment of a numerical value before publishing) - 2 page 7 (twice): SetKeyParticipentSet -> SetKeyParticipantSet - 2 page 7 (in intersection): if it is all -> if it is in all ^^ - 2 page 8: miniumum -> minimum - 2 page 8 (twice): freeform -> free form - 2 page 8: SubjectPublicKeyInfor -> SubjectPublicKeyInfo - 5 page 9: Housely -> Housley? - 6.1 page 10 (RFC6031): please use the 'RFC' abbrev