I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avt-forward-shifted-red-05 Reviewer: Wassim Haddad Review Date: 13-July-2010 IETF LC End Date: 09-July-2010 IESG Telechat date: 15-July-2010 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a a proposed standard. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: - The Abstract points to one reference and it would be better to remove it. - Section 3: I would suggest re-writing the last three lines to make the sentence easier to understand: "and is hence a time..." should be re-written.