Document: draft-ietf-avt-rtcpssm-18
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2009-06-04
IETF LC End Date: 2009-06-05
IESG Telechat date: (not known)

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Proposes Standard

Major issues: none

Minor issues: Typos and some formatting 

Line 843 
   provide a consistent behavior in the advancement if time (similar 
Should be: 
   provide a consistent behavior in the advancement of time (similar 

Line 1249 
     long as the those entities receiving and processing RTCP 
Should be: 
     long as those entities receiving and processing RTCP 

Line 1917: 
     eagerly change their own SSRC eagerly or unnecessarily. 
Should be: 
     change their own SSRC unnecessarily. 
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   attack or by mistake, e.g., an IP address configuration (e.g., 
   typing) error, could directly create a denial of service attack 
--- Need to rephrase the e.g.s 

Lines 2738-2742: 
the operation of RTP. For RTP-compliant receivers that do not 
understand the unicast mechanisms, the RTCP traffic may still reach 
the group, in the event that an ASM distribution network is used, in 
which case there may be some duplication of traffic due to the 
reflection channel, but this should be ignored. It is anticipated,
--- Sentence seems too long. 

Section 16.4 - Needs a  bit of formatting.