Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipsec-meth-05.txt Reviewer: Sean Turner Review Date: 2009-10-17 IETF LC End Date: N/A IESG Telechat date: 2009-10-22 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication Comments: The NITS tool is complaining about 16 unused references and 10 obsolete references. I'd also add that [FIPS.186-1.1998] isn't actually used as a reference. Nits: Sec 4: r/in RFC 2119. RFC 2119/in [RFC2119]. [RFC2119] Secs 8.1-11.3: r:/Topology /Topology: Sec 8.1: r/If all packet are/If all packets are Sec 8.1: r/format should reflect/format SHOULD reflect Sec 10.1: r/Reporting Format/Reporting Format: Sec 13.1: r/(timestamp_B).The/(timestamp_B). The