Document: draft-ietf-capwap-802dot11-mib-05.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 12 December 2009 IETF LC End Date: 7 December 2009 IESG Telechat date: (if known)= Summary: Ready for the IESG. There are a few editorial nits noted below (the example IP addresses need to be fixed). Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: s3: WLAN is defined but no expansion of the acronym is given. s5.1: Possibly define/expand PHY. s5.2, next to last bullet: s/manage/management/ s5.3, last sentence; expand BSS acronym s7.2: The paragraph > Also, the AC MUST have a mechanism that preserves the value of the > WLAN Profile Interfaces' ifIndexes in the ifTable at AC reboot. > is duplicated (last and last but 2). s8: The IP addresses should be taken from the 'example' ranges (see http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-iana-ipv4-examples-01). I don't know that there is an example MAC address - the RFC Editor should know. s9: Maybe WLAN and BSS should be expanded here in the descriptions as well.