Document: draft-ietf-csi-sndp-prob-03.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Dec. 2, 2009 IETF LC End Date: ?? IESG Telechat date: Dec 3, 2009 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Informational; I reviewed it as a generalist and found 0 major issues, 0 minor issues, and 3 nits. Nits: 1) You may want to expand SEND before first use in Section 2; you do so later on (below Figure 1), but should move that up. 2) S2.3, below Figure 3: The text says that "An alternative (alluded to in an appendix of ND Proxy)..." You may want to provide a reference to the document containing this appendix. 3) S3.3: s/options) [RFC4389]/options) [RFC4389]. (note the missing period above.)