I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-geopriv-policy-21.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I have one comment. Minor ===== Section 7.2 "Rule Example with Geodetic Location Condition" refers to a location condition based on a polygon but the XML below refers to a location condition based on a circle. Can you please fix this inconsistency.