Document: draft-ietf-hip-nat-traversal-08 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 2009-09-02 IETF LC End Date: 2009-09-02 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready for publication Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Abstract: elements of procedure SHOULD BE: elements of a procedure Section 4.7: periodically keepalives SHOULD BE: periodic keepalives