Document: draft-ietf-hokey-preauth-ps-11.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2010/01/20
IESG Telechat date: 2010/01/21

Summary: Ready

The version 09 was reviewed with Ready summary, this is about version 11.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments (from previous review):
 - Abstract page 2: Extensible Authentication Protocol -> ... (EAP)
  What I meant is:
    Extensible Authentication Protocol -> Extensible Authentication
      Protocol (EAP)
  Not: Extensible Authentication Protocol -> EAP

 - 3.3.1 page 8: two forms:. ... -> two forms: horizontal and vertical.
  (or: Horizontal and Vertical.)

 - 13.2 pages 19 and 20: some spurious spaces before commas.
 - 13.2 page 19: bad cut in URLs (<\nhttp or <htt\np...)
  You still have some formating problems in references (please
  signal them to the RFC Editor who'll fix them)