Document: draft-ietf-idnabis-tables-07.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 14-October-2009
IETF LC End Date: 15-October-2009

Summary: The document is almost ready for publication as a standards 
track RFC. There is one issue with IANA that in my opinion may 
cause confusion, and a number of small editorials.

Major issues:

- none.

Minor issues:

- In my opinion, the IANA considerations sections is not clear enough. 
First, I didn't understand if a new register is to be created by IANA or 
an existing one should change. Second, I don't understand what is the 
name of this registry.

Furthermore, the text in Section 5.2 refers to a table from which that 
registry can be initialized, which apparently appears in Appendix A. So, 
it is not clear if the new register has to be initialized with that content 
or not. And I am not able to locate that table in Appendix A. I am not sure 
if IANA has better abilities than me, but I would suggest that the document 
gives IANA very clear instructions, for example, by naming new (or existing) 
registers, and by providing a table with the data as it should go into the 
registry.


Nits/editorial comments:

- Acronyms should be expanded at first occurrence. This includes IDNA 
(in the title) and IDN.

- Introduction, first line in first paragraph, missing white space:
  "RFC 3690 [RFC4690]suggests"
                   ^^^

- Idnits reports that there are 2 instances of too long lines in 
the document, the longest one being 2 characters in excess of 72.

- Unused Reference: 'IDNA2008-definitions'