Document: draft-ietf-keyprov-symmetrickeyformat-07.txt
Reviewer: Enrico Marocco
Review Date: 2010-04-26
IETF LC End Date: 2010-04-26
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.

Note: I'm not an expert in the area, hopefully more expert eyes have
looked and are going to look at the ASN.1.

Minor nits:

Section 1. Introduction, second para: s/uses cases/use cases/

Section 3.3.4. Key Usage, "Verify" bullet: move the period after the
parenthesis.

Section 4.1. AES Key Encoding, first para, second sentence:

OLD

   The first octet of sKey SHALL become the key byte in AES labeled
   index 0 in [FIPS197] SHALL be the first octet of sKey, and the other
   key bytes SHALL follow in index order.

NEW

   The key byte in AES labeled index 0 in [FIPS197] SHALL be the first
   octet of sKey, and the other key bytes SHALL follow in index order.

Section 4.2. Triple DES Key Encoding, second para: "msb" acronym is used
without definition. It could be easily defined at the end of the
previous sentence, where it is expanded.

Section 5. Security Considerations, first para: s/[CMS]/[RFC5652]/