Document: draft-ietf-l2tpext-tdm-06.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 27-November-2008 IETF LC End Date: 28-November-2008 Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Proposed Standard but I have a few comments. Minor ===== Section 2.1 bullet points 1) & 2): * I think it may be better to reference RFC5287 section 3.3 instead of duplicating the values here. I found the contents very similar. Editorial ========= * Please expand acronyms at first use or use an appropriate reference. Section IANA Considerations: * s/RC-TDB-1/RC-TBD-1/