Document: draft-ietf-mip4-rfc3344bis-09.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia Review Date: 2010-03-08 IETF LC End Date: 2010-03-11 IESG Telechat date: 2010-03-11 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC- Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: - The document is solid, as one should expect from a "bis" draft. Since it is a long document, I focused on the changes of version 09 of the draft since RFC 3344. - I will suggest to add a Figure number and a caption to each of the figures in the draft. For example, take a look at figures in Section 2.1.1, 2.1.2, and so on. I recognize that captions were not present in RFC 3344, but I think this will improve the readability of the document and add the possibility to refer to figures from external documents. - Typo in Section 3.8.3: duplicated "it". "it it SHOULD in most cases send" ^^ - The structure of Appendix G is a bit confusing. Section G.1 lists the changes made since RFC 3344. Sections G.2 and G.3 list the Major and Minor Changes, respectively, but it is not clear to me if these are changes since RFC 3344 or they include earlier changes as well. To add more confusion, Section G4 lists the changes since RFC 3344, but wasn't this what Section G.1 is all about? - I noticed that IANA has made a number of comments about Section 6, so I will refrain from making comments.