Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4756bis-06 Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: 17 March 2010 IETF LC End Date: 18 March 2010 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: This is a well-written and readable draft on a new grouping approach in SDP for associating forward error correction flows with the flows that are protected by the forward error correction flows. It's necessary to be an SDP expert to fully understand this draft, and in particular I assume that SDP experts have checked the examples. All of my comments are minor. The IPv4 addresses used in the examples are not from the 192.0.2.0/24 block of addresses for examples - they appear to be IP Multicast addresses, and I'm not sure what IP Multicast addresses are appropriate for use in examples. Please check with your WG chairs and AD on what (if anything) should be done about this (the examples may be ok as-is). The 3388bis entry on the Updates: line on the title page is novel (I've never seen that before). Please add an RFC Editor Note to the Abstract asking the RFC Editor to replace that with the RFC number for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc3388bis-04 when that draft is published as an RFC. idnits 2.12.01 found a couple of nits: == You're using the IETF Trust Provisions' Section 6.b License Notice from 12 Sep 2009 rather than the newer Notice from 28 Dec 2009. (See http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/) --> Just copy the new boilerplate ... == Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of draft-ietf-fecframe-framework-05 --> This should be updated if draft is revised, but will be caught by the RFC Editor in any case.