Document: draft-ietf-mpls-gmpls-lsp-reroute-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2009-08-31 IETF LC End Date: 2009-08-31 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 8 page 12: Author's Addresses -> Authors' Addresses - 1 page 3: i.e. -> i.e., - 2.1 page 4: please introduce the ERO (Explict Route Object) abbrev (note the TLV abbrev is supposed to be common so doesn't need to be introduced, cf http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt ) - 2.1 page 5: IF_IF -> IF_ID - 2.2 page 6 and 2.3 page 6: conformant -> compliant - 2.2 page 6: Re-routing -> re-routing - 2.2 page 6: is note -> is not Note: the usage of rerouting/re-routing is not very uniform...