Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. The authors have addressed most of the items noted in the Gen-ART review of the -09 version, but there is one item that could still use some attention. From the original review: [D] The security considerations section should include specific mention of injection of LKI request OAM packets as a vector for a denial-of-service attack (this is an obvious way for a man-in-the-middle to quickly cause serious havoc). That would be a good specific example to add to the end of the current security considerations paragraph that requires the network to be physically secure against man-in-the-middle attacks. This has not been done. While the security considerations section does cover the countermeasures necessary to prevent this attack, I prefer security considerations sections that include examples of things that can go badly wrong when implementers don't pay attention when the examples are simple. That preference is a matter of style/taste that I'll leave to the responsible AD's judgment [Adrian, I think that's your cue ;-) ]. idnits 2.12.05 ran clean.