Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-uni-nni-02
Reviewer: Ben Campbell	
Review Date: 2010-12-21
IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-23
IESG Telechat date: (if known)


Summary: This draft is ready for publication as in informational RFC. I have a
small number of editorial comments that I think could further improve the
draft if there is another round of editing.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- Section 1, 1st paragraph:

I suggest moving the expansion of MPLS-TP TP the first mention in the body of
the draft.

-- Section 1.1, 1st paragraph:

More conventional in what context? Useful for what purpose?

-- Section 1.2, definition of UNI-N

I suggest expanding PE in the definition.

-- Figures 1 and 2:

Is the meaning of the various line types described elsewhere? If so, a
statement to that effect with a reference would be helpful.

-- Figure 2:

I suggest expanding CP somewhere.