Document: draft-ietf-pce-global-concurrent-optimization-10
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: April 3, 2009
IESG Telechat date: April 9, 2009

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.

Comments:

The -10 draft addresses all of the points noted in the Gen-ART review of the -08 version.  Unfortunately, idnits 2.11.08 found a few things to complain about:

  ** You're using the IETF Trust Provisions Section 6.b License Notice from
     10 Nov 2008 rather than the newer Notice from 12 Feb 2009, which is
     required now.  (See http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/)

  ** There are 3 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one
     being 2 characters in excess of 72.

  == The document seems to lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but was
     first submitted before 10 November 2008.  Should you add the disclaimer?
     (See the Legal Provisions document at
     http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info for more information.).

  == Missing Reference: 'PCEP' is mentioned on line 565, but not defined

The RFC Editor can take care of the "too long lines" item, but the other three items need attention.