Document: draft-ietf-pmol-metrics-framework-07.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 25-Jan-2011
IETF LC End Date: 27-Jan-2011

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP.   

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

- Abstract: the word "over" is duplicated.

- Section 1, first paragraph. Missing dot closing the paragraph.

- Section 3, first paragraph. I recommend to use the present tense in the last
  sentence of the paragraph:

  "As such, this document does not defined any performance metrics".

- Section 5.2, first paragraph.

  s/of an networking/of a networking
       ^^

- Section 5.4.3, last paragraph. Add a formal informative reference to RFC
  3550.

- Section 5.4.5, forth paragraph. Add a formal informative reference to RFC
  3611.

- Section 5.4.5, 7th paragraph. Add a formal informative reference to RFC
  3611.