Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-vccv-bfd-05 Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2009-07-02 IETF LC End Date: 2009-07-02 IESG Telechat date: (if known) -- Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Major issues: None Minor issues: Line 480 This precedence order prioritizes superset of functionality and simplicity of encapsulation. - Hard to understand what the sentence means. Nits/editorial comments: line 259: the scope of this specification, and is instead defined in - Word "instead" is probably redundant. Line 287: within the rage 49152 through 65535. The IP Protocol Number and - rage -> range Line 378 see Table 1 in in Section 3. - in in -> in Line 440 continue using it until such time as the PW is re-signaled. In - Probably should be: continue using it until when the PW is re-signaled. In Line 466 the order lowest list number CV Type to highest list number CV Type, - Should be: the order of the lowest list number CV Type to the highest list number CV Type,