Draft: draft-ietf-radext-design-07.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> 
Review Date: 8 April 2009
IETF LC Date: 23 March 2009

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as a BCP RFC.


Comments:

ID nits complains that reference [8] appears in Appendix B.6 but not in the References.

The Introduction Section should be a non-normative section. However, Section 1.1 uses normative statements (RECOMMENDED and NOT RECOMMENDED) before those terms are defined in Section 1.3.

The acronym AAA should be expanded.

When referring to the appendixes, I think the draft should talk about appendixes, not about sections. For example, it should talk about Appendix A.5, not about Section A.5.