Document: draft-ietf-simple-interdomain-scaling-analysis-06.txt
     Presence Interdomain Scaling Analysis for SIP/SIMPLE
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 26-June-2009
IETF LC End Date: 6-July-2009
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is probably ready for publication as an Informational RFC.  If revisions are needed, some minor items should be considered.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
	I think that I do not understand how the document uses the term "day". 
  c01 is the average lifetime of a subscription.  However, it also seems to be the definition of day in section 2.3.5.  This is not a big deal as it seems to normalize out when one looks at the per-second numbers.  But it seems to make the "per day" numbers confusing.  I suspect that what is needed is simply a definition of "day" for this document.

Nits/editorial comments:
	The introduction has multiple examples of unusual English language usages.  They are not listed here, but are left to the editors to analyze and resolve.  (This problem continues at a lower frequency throughout the document.)
	Section 2.3.5 labels the third bottom line value as B02 instead of B03.
	The third line in section 3.1.3 should have a comma in the 23437M number for readability.