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draft-ietf-sipping-nat-scenarios-15

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you may receive.

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC
but it has an issue that probably needs to be fixed before publication.

Minor
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* The draft uses addresses from the RFC1918 space in the examples instead of
* using the addresses reserved for documentation in RFC 5735 (i.e.
* 192.0.2.0/24, 198.51.100.0/24, and 203.0.113.0/24). It would be good if this
* can be fixed in the draft.