Document: draft-ietf-sipping-policy-package-05.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan [suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com] REview Date: 9/10/2008 IETF LC Date: 9/11/2008 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard, but I have two minor comments that you may like to address. MINOR ===== * TLS v1.1 has been obsoleted by TLS v1.2 (very recently). I do not know if there are any rules regarding referring to obsolete specs, but you may want to keep this in mind. EDITORIAL ========= * I tried to read the normative reference draft-ietf-sipping-media-policy-dataset-07.txt but I could not find it. The latest I could find was -06.