Document: draft-ietf-syslog-dtls-05.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 17-May-2010
IETF LC End Date: 20-May-2010
IETF Telechat Date: 20-May-2010

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues:

- In Section 5.3, the last sentence of the first paragraph reads:

   "When the DTLS handshake has
   finished, the transport sender MAY then send the first syslog
   message."

I think what you really want to say is:

   "The transport sender MUST NOT send any syslog message before the
    DTLS handshake has successfully completed."

- I noticed that IANA picked well their actions. However, it would be better 
if, in the second paragraph of Section 8, you specified that the registry 
where IANA needs to operate is the "Service Code subregisty of the 
Datagram Congestion Control Protocol (DCCP) Parameters registry".

Nits/editorial comments:

- Section 5.3, second paragraph. It would be nice to have a reference 
to the TLS_RSA_WITH_AES_128_CBC_SHA cipher suite.


- Section 5.4.1: It would be nice to add a formal reference to RFC 5425 when 
it is mentioned.

- Third paragraph in Secction 6: s/udp/UDP

- idnits reveals:

Outdated reference: draft-ietf-syslog-sign has been published as RFC 5848