[Apologies to the author:  This document slipped through the gen-art
last call review net. This is a belated and very quick check of this
document after reading xmpp-3920bis.  I didn't find anything much
problematic.]

Document: draft-ietf-xmpp-address-07
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 30 November 2010
IETF LC End Date: 
IESG Telechat date: 2 December 2010

Summary:
This is a very well written document that is mostly easy to read and
follow.  (Essentially) ready.  There is one missing definition that is
really needed for xmpp-3920bis - 'Bare JID'. Caveat: I haven't done a 
detailed check of the Notes and Prohibited Outputs in the appendices.

Major issues:
None.

Minor issues:
s4.3.1, last para: There should be a formal definition of 'Bare JID' as
it is extensively used in draft-ietf-xmpp-3920bis.  Note that almost all the
cases where 'Bare JID' is used, both in this document and 3920bis add a
expansion 
that this means <localpart@domainname>,  except for one instance in s8.1.2.1
of 3920bis where it means just <domainname> (also referred to as 'Mere
Dominname'
elsewhere in 3920bis!).

The definition either needs to cover both cases or a different term needs to
be
created and used consistently for the Mere Domainname case.
 
Nits/editorial comments:
None