Document: draft-lha-gssapi-delegate-policy-04.txt
Reviewer: Sean Turner
Review Date: 2009-11-15
IETF LC End Date: 2009-12-08
IESG Telechat date: unknown
 
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that 
should be fixed before publication
 
Comments: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that 
should be fixed before publication.
 
Nits:
 
Spell out CIFS on first occurance.  It's not in the RFC Editor's 
abbreviations list 
(http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt).
 
Sec 1: r/It would is desirable/It is desirable

Sec 2: r/If the deleg_policy_req_flag is set, then delegation should be 
performed if recommended by central policy./If the deleg_policy_req_flag is 
set, then delegation SHOULD be performed if recommended by central policy.
 
Sec 5: r/the MUST/they MUST