Document: draft-mraihi-mutual-oath-hotp-variants-12 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Feb-03-2011 IETF LC End Date: Feb-08-2011 IESG Telechat date: Feb-17-2011 Summary: This draft is ready as an Informational RFC. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 0 Nits/editorial comments: 2 Nits/editorials 1) S8.2, "IC2 - Keys should be ..." --- here, is the "should" normative? 2) S8.2, "IC8 ... This will enable you to counter certain types of man-in-the-middle attacks." The use of "you" seems funny here; better to say, "... This will enabling the thwarting of certain types of man-in-the-middle attacks."