Document: draft-sinnreich-sip-tools-06 Reviewer: Scott Brim Review Date: 21 May 2009 IETF last call date: 2009 June 05 Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. Major issues: I'm sympathetic but I don't think the recent changes have adequately answered the issues that Paul brought up in his review. I discussed it with him and the following things concern me: - HIP: Yes, you could use HIP, but HIP NAT traversal uses HIP, (simplified) ICE, and TURN and rendezvous servers. You get rid of SIP servers, but that's all, then you add HIP rendezvous servers and you also have to deal with the question of authentication services for HIP. - Emergency services: Some language has been added but someone with emergency services credentials should check it ... some of what is advocated may be illegal in some scenarios. The extra language doesn't seem to clarify, rather it seems to send a mixed message. As I said I'm sympathetic to the goal. In those two areas, maybe it would be good to be less ambitious, to tone down the text and not overextend your reach? I don't think it would weaken the case.